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Poignant painting of this scene, David, the urgent panicked dialogue... and mother's commentary thereafter.

Ufff.

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'calling in the cloud' conjures up a surreal image, and then the horror hits that this is actually someone's reality. So well written.

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Mostly the words i heard her say on the tv report, but i only wrote down what I could remember since they were so emotive and constructed in these short images.. so i just tried to piece that all together.

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This is so gripping from the first stanza. So well done.

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This is so powerful and heartbreaking. It’s everything all at once.

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Yes, heard her words and felt they needed to be shared. Thanks for reading.

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