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Lovely David - the intrigue of the story

'and the crowd called out for more' ⚡

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Thanks so much :) !!

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David- Heavy hopes indeed. This rings true. And timeless. I appreciate this.

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Wow thank you so much for your comment and for dropping in to read, i really appreciate it!

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The imagery is intriguing! Especially those pennies and the gaze and the withered bill. Curious and passionate.

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Thanks Sarah! Means a lot to have your comments and for reading 🙏

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'Heaving hearts and heavy hopes.' this is one of those lines I wish was mine, getting to read it as yours is just as good though.

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:) I think we all just happen to find the lines waiting for us out there in the universe. Happy to share what little I’ve found.

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love the idea of exploding bulbous and ripe into a space...lovely work!

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Thanks so much will!

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This is marvelous, so mysterious and textured.

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:) It'd be no fun if I just spelled it out. :D Thanks so much for coming and reading and commenting LeeAnn! It means a huge amount.

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I agree. The mystery is part of what makes it so good.

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Lovely. That last stanza really got to me.

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Thanks so much, Margaret.

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Very nice, David! I like the brokenness of the lines and how they go together; has a nice organic kind of a feel to it.

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That's great to hear, I did take note of that when writing and wanted to explore a bit more in that area.. so it's nice to see it come through.

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So lovely, David!! Anticipation bloomified 🪻 Thanks for sharing!! XO

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Great to hear, Danielle! Thank you for reading and commenting!

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