To That Tree Atop the Hill
Season 3.4: From this crack on the path, To that tree atop the hill.
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From this crack on the path, To that tree atop the hill; This is the only space that matters. Measured in weights of will and motivation, To dominate the mind’s deterrence, And annihilate this nothing distance. — Time’s stream slips In frames flashed Through gaps In a bike light Zeotrope Filtering the gait In bus-stop glass Where ardent strides On burning thighs Climb and pull And loose and pull And loose again The acid prised From sinews lithe And grip the pistons Hot with fight That slow despite The imposition Of the lungs That heave To crest The rising road Rising Rising Rising Unto that tree. — High beams catch the hanging white Phantom of a soul in flight above its body, Steaming, wet and heaving Against the winter’s cold and amber glow, As the city thrums below and phases Through each black breath that rises still, To that tree atop the hill; now conquered.
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The pace of this and the way it mirrors the words you chose - annihilate, dominate, conquered. You're very good at creating a rhythm that reflects the feeling in your words. I noticed that with your last poem,"Home." Some inspiration to play with that more in my own writing!
This was an amazing read! The descriptions and imagery were so visceral and powerful. The set up in the first stanza, straight to the point with strong word choice that I completely understood the context and the stakes. The second stanza, all show and no tell, the short and sudden sensory imagery convey the physical toil very well and the final stanza is a well worthy pay off. This is one of my favorites from you thus far!