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The L sounds are divine David. All of those beautiful sounds. You made me look up 2 words. Lovely meditation, up close reflection. It holds a hymnal on the space between.

https://open.spotify.com/track/4XTuSMs47SIg35KxhNIUGe?si=LvvvDRGnTqqMWqjR_PDcNQ

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Ah great song! Thanks for reading so closely Siodhna!

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The singer Birdy does a sweet version of White Winter Hymnal, as well.

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SO lovely! I love how the whole thing is painted in a warm, inviting light, that is perfection for this time of year! The light goes so fast, and then the warmth of internal lights can be seen, like stars in the sky. They were always there, just couldn't be seen until darkness falls and lasts only until the sun comes up again. Gorgeous! That we could hope for just one night...XO

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What a great reflection. Thanks so much for sharing that and for taking the time to read!

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Each time I read this I get something more. I love how you set this up.

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Brilliant, thanks so much for reading 🙏🙏🙏

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🔥🩸🔥

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🙏🎉🙏

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Right here:

"Where our soft stare holds a hymnal

Soaring on our haggard harmony"

is where the poem hit its stride. Well done.

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Wow thanks so much Mark! 😌

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These lines: 'Where our signal is zeroed out, dissolved

And fuzzed in the space between us, painted

Transparent in our single phase denouement,'

To write of connection with these words - they move deeply into the heart.

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Wow, Sarah, thanks for sharing that!

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Loved the arrangement, especially the repeating lines throughout. Very much enjoyed:

"Where our soft stare holds a hymnal

Soaring on our haggard harmony,"

Nice job all around!

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I reread in a whole different light after scrolling to the picture at the end.

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